Fabulous demonstration. A fun way to get students engaged, and hearing how awful some writing can be. Who would want to listen to a vacation plan like this? Or go with the person planning it? Having brave students (thanks Eva and Mike) give examples in front of the class helps everyone get involved. I need to incorporate this more. Thanks for providing the text for the exercise.
Julie Fales
SM South
Overland Park, Kan.
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